Potential, but wasted
Good idea, but the way you did it made it fall apart.
1. I couldn't hear it properly unless I turned it up a huge amount, and when I did, notifications appeared.
2. Why is he doing this? Due to no. 1, I couldn't tell.
3. 'No' means you wake up in bed. Always. Could something else happen sometimes?
You had a good idea with the "sacrifice" thing, it just wasn't a good cause (whatever it was)